The Stoplight Method for Revision, Part II: Yellow Light Issues
Last week I gave an overview of the Stoplight method for revision, focusing on the Red Light issues – the major issues you need to deal with before anything else. This is by far the hardest part of revision, since it involves looking at things like character arc and structure.
The Stoplight Method for Revision, Part I: Red Light Issues
Have you ever finished a manuscript, and wondered, Now what do I do? If so, you are not alone. The majority of writers think that revision means “go back to the beginning and start from page 1 and then edit each line.”
WRONG.
Where Do You Get Your Inspiration?
This month I’m celebrating finally finishing the draft of the rewrite of my Middle Grande novel. It was pretty much a Page One rewrite, and frankly I’m not sure it’s any better than the original. It was fun to do, but I’m glad it’s over. Well, not over - I still have to revise. But first I need to let it sit for a while. I need to let all the questions percolate in my brain. Then I’ll re-read it and see what I’ve got.
What To Do When You Have Too Many Ideas
This past weekend, I found myself in a Läderach chocolate shop very similar to the one in the above image. I hadn’t had Läderach chocolates since my last trip through Zurich in 2018, and let me tell you, they are divine. I recently learned they opened a shop in Boston, and it was all I could do to restrain myself from heading there the next day, work obligations be damned.
“I don’t know what happens next”: Writing Transitional Scenes
As I continue my February Writing Challenge, I had a new hurdle last week: Transitional Scenes. These scenes are important, but they don’t get a lot of attention from people talking about craft, or often writers themselves.
Making a Scene: How to Go Deep to Maximize Action and Emotion
This week I hit that pivotal moment in my novel, where we turn into Act III. It’s a good place for an “all is lost” moment. Maybe even a culmination of many moments, where the Protagonist realizes nothing is going right, and it’s her against the world.
New Year’s Goal Check-in: 7 Ways to Rev Up Your Motivation if the Winter Blues Are Setting In
Google “What percentage of people give up their new year resolutions by February” and you get a consistent statistic: 80%. I have no idea how accurate that is, but it seems pretty consistent with the fact that for most people I know, myself included, commitment starts to flag right around this time.
How Watching Films & TV Can Improve Your Writing
Awesome! You mean all my hours of binge-watching Netflix, HBOMax, Amazon Prime, AppleTV+, Disney+, Hulu, etc., etc. Are actually helping my writing?
Well, yes, and no.
3 Steps to a Successful MFA Application
So you’ve decided to actually apply to an MFA program in Creative Writing. By now, hopefully you’ve researched lots of programs and know where you want to apply. You don’t need to apply to 10; in fact, I would say, apply to no more than 3–5. The application fees can add up, for one thing (although they may be waived if you call the Admissions office and cite financial hardship). Also, it can be time-consuming, since each program will likely have slightly different essay questions to answer or other hoops to jump through.
10 Considerations Before You Apply to a Creative Writing MFA Program
This week I presented on a panel at my MFA alma mater, Lesley University. I did my MFA quite a few years ago now, and worked for the program for many years afterward as Assistant Director.
Getting an MFA is still a dream for a lot of people, but there are now more options for serious writing training. I recently spoke to a client who wasn’t sure if he wanted to do an MFA or not – or if he was even ready to apply. Our conversation sparked some ideas that I wanted to share for anyone considering doing an MFA.
10 Tricks to Maintain a Consistent Writing Practice
Many of us have made writing goals in the New Year. In these first heady days of possibility and excitement, we may find it easy to stick to our commitment – to write every day, to write a certain number of words per day or week, to finally finish that book that’s been dragging on (and on...).
The Four Burner System of New Year Planning
It’s that time of year when thoughts turn to setting goals for the next year. Even if you’re not a “New Year’s Resolutions” person, you may be thinking about what you accomplished this year, and what you want to accomplish in 2023.
My Most Popular Articles of 2022
As we rush toward the holidays, I realize most of us do not have time to red and absorb lots of articles and new information. But maybe next week there will be a lull... we can hope! So I thought it might be fun to see what my most popular articles were from 2022, and put them all in one place so you can catch up on any you missed. May they bring you inspiration for your writing in 2023!
The Best Books I’ve Read in 2022
I’ve read 55 books so far this year. I’ll probably sneak a few more in before December 31, but these are the ones that made my top picks. I’ve also read a bunch of books on Buddhist practice, which I’ve excluded from the list since they’re only relevant if you’re Buddhist. This means I’ve read fewer nonfiction books overall, but I’m okay with that. There are always more books to read!
My Annual List of Gifts for Writers, 2022 Edition
This is my favorite post to compile every year – mainly because I see so many fun things *I’d* like.
The Importance of Letting Your Work Rest Before Editing – and What to Do While You Wait
Some of you have no doubt just finished NaNoWriMo ‘22. Congratulations! The good news is, November is over.
The bad news is, your novel isn’t.
7 Tips to Help You Write Faster
If you’re nearing the end of NaNoWriMo and you’re not quite where you need to be in terms of word count, don’t despair! These simple tricks will help you write faster (and they’ll work whether you’re doing NaNo or not).
Tolerance for Uncertainty is the Prerequisite to Succeeding
I’ve been re-reading Art and Fear: Observations on the Perils (and Rewards) of Artmaking – by David Bayles and Ted Orland. It’s a short book, but every page is full of gems of advice for anyone in any artistic field. It’s definitely one to return to over and over, to remind yourself of what you face, and what is at stake, when you sit down to write.
Fear is Part of the Process
One of the advantages of doing a writing sprint like NaNoWriMo is that, if you stick with the plan of writing 50K words in 30 days, it forces you to blow past any fears or doubts. You don’t have time to worry. You just have to hit your word goal, day after day.
Whether you’re currently doing NaNo or not, though, fear will eventually creep up on you. Why? Because you’re doing work that matters to you.
8 Ways to Help You Focus Like a Pro While Writing
Some of you have started NaNoWriMo this week – or some version of a writing challenge. Congratulations! Sometimes it takes a specific challenge to break through that resistance and get us to actually sit down and write. Sometimes knowing it’s for a limited period of time helps us focus. It’s far more effective in terms of meeting your goal to say, “I’m going to write 1,000 words per day for the next month” than to say “I’m going to write 1,000 words per day until I get this novel done.”
Which brings us to today’s topic: Focus.